People usually assume that young children under 18-year-old have to receive full-time education. In my opinion, the advantages for this idea will far exceed its drawbacks.
In more countries it has been obligated by law for all parents to send their children to school from age 6 to 15. While high school education from age 15 to 18 sometimes are not as obligatorily as primary and junior-high education. Someone believe that junior-high education level is enough for most people to fulfill their basis life needs such as read and calculate, or find a work so they have no necessarily to spend much money to education. The consequences was easily to imagine, however, the world today are not as simple as it was. Young people with immaturity mental might involve themselves into some crimes.
In my view, young children should have full-time education until their majority by considering some facts. Firstly, they can be well-prepared for future life under a relatively safe circumstance with their peers. The education would not only give them knowledge but also provide more opportunity and support to help children to mould a sound personality. Another fact is that most occupation today are think highly of education level. The borderline usually be high school graduated level. Therefore young people should at least graduated from high school for better life stance.
In conclusion, I agree with the full-time system education for all youngsters until their majority in order that they can well-adopting the competitive society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...mary and junior-high education. Someone believe that junior-high education level is eno...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'Someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...mary and junior-high education. Someone believe that junior-high education level is eno...
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Line 3, column 464, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[5]
Message: You should probably use: 'were'.
Suggestion: were
...ch money to education. The consequences was easily to imagine, however, the world t...
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Line 5, column 403, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
... fact is that most occupation today are think highly of education level. The borderli...
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Line 5, column 451, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be usually
...ghly of education level. The borderline usually be high school graduated level. Therefore ...
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Line 5, column 491, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...usually be high school graduated level. Therefore young people should at least graduated ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, at least, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25101214575 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80678655751 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607287449393 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.167614694 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6428571429 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283807215699 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095990239619 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102545535429 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187010771718 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031563735931 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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