The charts give the information on the ages of population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections in 2050
The pie charts illustrates the proportions of the present and future populations divided into three age groups from Yemen and Italy in 2000 and 2050.
It is clear that while people at the employment age of both countries have taken up the largest percentages over the years, the opposite is observed when it comes to the two other groups.
In terms of Yemen's populations, although the middle group occupied fewer proportions than the young did in 2000, 46.3% and 50.1% respectively, 2050 will see a significant increase in the number of 15 to 59-year-old citizens with 57.3%. Whilst, the rate of the elder has always stood at the bottom of the list over a 50-year period, which was 3.6% in 2000 and will be 5.7% in 2050.
On the other hand, after 50 years, Italy will witness a dramatic rise in the amount of adolescents from 24.1% at the present ti 42.3% in the future, making them the second largest group in the country. Whereas, not only will the number of people at the employment age fall by over 15% from 61.6% to 46.2%, but the same downward trend can also be seen at the smallest group.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...59-year-old citizens with 57.3%. Whilst, the rate of the elder has always stood a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58883248731 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45422941704 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619289340102 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.82071814 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.666666667 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8333333333 22.9334400587 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198019361311 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109744868719 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122043130107 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143748181447 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138293536303 0.0819641961636 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.38 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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