The world natural resources are being consumed at an ever-increased rate. What are the dangers of this situation ? What should we do?
As a common knowledge, natural resources play a pivotal role in our life, especially in this fast-paced, modern world as they fuel the development of global rigorous economy. However, recently, these resources have been ever-increasingly exploited, which may leaves huge impacts on society. Therefore, measures should be taken to reduce the mass exploitation as well as the severe effects of this situation.
As natural resources have been consumed worldwide with an ever-increased rate, our environment and society will be placed in a dire situation. Firstly, the consumption of these resources may detrimental to our environment since it releases a huge amount of greenhouse gases. As a result, it is attributable to the climate change. For example, Hanoi, a northern province of Vietnam had to suffer the most severe drought since 1940s, with the average recorded temperature at 44 Celsuis degrees in last summer. Secondly, manufacturing activities relating the usage of natural resources may result in air pollution, water pollution, soil pollution. Consequently, residence in these areas are oftentimes diagnosised being cancer, thereby, it becomes the burden to the government.
Therefore, it is imperative to impose strict solutions in order to tackle this problem once and for all, with regard to individual and government scale. As for individual, each person should be aware of the adverse impacts of overusing natural resources. Therefore, they will utilize these energies economically instead of using with abandon as they did in the past. By doing so, they incidentally reduce the amount of exploitation natural resources. Additionally, the government should launch rough laws towards exploiting natural resources and encourage factories and households use alternative, renewable energies such as solar or wind energy.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the ever-increasing exploitation of natural resources will leave negative impacts on environment and society. Hence, the government and community should both make effort to solve this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, incidentally, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as for, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68387096774 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18136483385 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593548387097 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2747760158 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.125 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3125 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256842859115 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765492704165 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623355390445 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155600861509 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263390974519 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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