What has cause people to immigrate from your country to other places?
Recent years have witnessed a boom in the number of immgrants from one country to another and this phenomenon is getting more prevalent. This trend is owing to various reasons, two of which are improved living standard and better education opportunities.
The first reason that the immigrants consider before deciding to settle in a foreign country as permanent residence is the chance of improvement in living standard. As most of the immigrants originate from less developed countries, life in wealthy ones offers better prospects. They can enjoy more job opportunties with high-paid positions depending on their professional skills, which makes earning a livelihood less tough and hence, a raise living condition. On top of that, social healthcare system and public transportation service in developed countries also appear to be more advanced than that of poorer ones. With this, new settlers would face minimal difficulties in their daily life such as commuting to work and maintaining a good health.
Apart from employment and welfare prospects, the exodus to foreign countries is also attributable to the search for better education opportunities. Students, for instance, are entitled to a more advanced and cutting-edge education sysyem, which fosters their potentials and capabilities. This explains why a number of people choose to pursue higher education in developed countries as it is scientifically designed and compiled to maximize students’s outcome as well as guarantee high chance of success for the graduates. To illustrate, in 2016, the total number of students studying abroad has reached almost 130,000.
In conclusion, people move to foreign countries which provide not only enhanced living standard but also better education system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5687732342 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0429638193 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60594795539 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7012099079 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.833333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131446658596 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497216792309 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446719205284 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837343641351 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117472036768 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.