At last years, people start to living and thinking personal. Most of the citizens do not care about community. Feeless public service can be compulsory part of high school education for gaining attitude such as sharing something, improving relationship with other people.
Firstly compulsory activities help high school students to have effective communication ability instead of being lonely person. If they work for charity or something else, they can talk easily with stranger. These kind of activities not only effect students but also effect positively the country. These students will successfully serve for their nation when they start to do their job because they will have a very significant advantage what is communication ability.
Secondly, educating young children about sportive activities contribute exploring and improving their skills about which sort of sports they can able to do. Starting a sportive activity too early, bring successful together. In addition to this young children do not waste their times when they related any sport. Also they became healthy person because doing sport is so important for human health and increase life quality so many research prove that.
Briefly, compulsory community activities make people successful and also community. People need to be related with neighbors for help each other when they need a hand. Surely attain sportive habit keep away people from time stealer activities and bad habits. In my opinion unpaid public services must be compulsory. Next step must be turn this activities a routine and voluntarily for every member of public for a strong, peaceful and successful nation.
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to your children). To what extend do you agree or disagree? 67
- The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050. 73
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 67
- Television has had a significant influence on the culture of manysocieties. To what extent would you say that television has positivelyor negatively affected the cultural development of your society? 100
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, kind of, sort of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47470817121 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62899142949 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634241245136 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6231795688 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9375 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239070177379 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764728696142 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503728279887 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151005327847 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038249457078 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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