The diagrams below illustrate the process of creation of a cocoon and how it would be used in silk cloth production.
Firstly, the moth lays its egg on the leaf, then it take about 10 days until turn to silk worm (larva) that feed on mulberry leaves. By passing 4-6 days, the larva covers its body through producing silk thread and up to 3-8 days it thoroughly changes to a cocoon. In case of following the life cycle, the fresh moth emerges out of cocoon after 16 days.
When it comes to the stage of production of silk cloth, it is needed to select the appropriate cocoons and they are poured to a container filled with water. It is heated until it stat to boiling. Then, it is the exact time regarding unwinding and approximately 300-900 meter thread is obtained out of each cocoon. The thread should be twisted, after that they are prepared for dyeing. On the other hand, the twisted silk thread could be weaved and then they are dyed with particular materials.
To sum up, it i distinctively manifest that it takes over 10 weeks for preparation of a cocoon that is suitable for silk cloth production.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, then, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.575 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4819296928 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2398856797 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179852268004 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662284771813 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729779431105 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116637896541 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583784509355 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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