Writing test
Writing task 1 (a letter)
You have recently been on a business trip to see some equipment that your company needs. Write a letter to the company that owns this equipment and say
– Describe the equipment.
– Ask for the features and specifications of this equipment.
– Explain why your company needs this equipment.
To,
The Manager,
Ajay Book Store,
V.V.Nagar
I am Divya Patel, studying MBA in Marketing in Gujarat Technological University. I am writing this letter to request you to arrange books which I need send to me via courier.
Last week, I visited your shop to buy two books, one is Marketing Management by A.K.Shrof and Advertising Management by George Henry but that time the books were not available and your sales person told me that you will have those books available in next week. I have looked for these books in my campus library as well as in all book stores near by me but I was unable to got these books and my final exams are knocking my door so I request you that if you have these send these books to me via courier in below mentioned address. Once, you get my letter please contact me on my number and send me your bank details I will transfer the payment of books in your bank.
Contact Details:
2, Shree Apartment, Ramdev Nagar, Near Iscon Circle, Ahmedabad 388001.
Phone: +91 1234567890
Hope to hear from you soon.
Kind Regards,
Divya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 5, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nagar
...o, The Manager, Ajay Book Store, V.V.Nagar I am Divya Patel, studying MBA in Ma...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Shrof
...oks, one is Marketing Management by A.K.Shrof and Advertising Management by George He...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 343, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...s library as well as in all book stores near by me but I was unable to got these books ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6387434555 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37745918209 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623036649215 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.0249963246 44.8134815571 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.75 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105598982676 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467759364175 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499938434966 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0473173151812 0.12726935374 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450355259553 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.