Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison. What do you think are the causes for this?
What possible solutions can you suggest?
As we all know that the world is facing with the crime problems and criminals are continuous commits crime after they had been released from the jail.
Commencing crime for the criminals is not that hard because they are used to it and in order to reduce the crime rate the government of all the country
should adopt strict rules and regulations which might help to decrease the number of crime.People are involved in crime due to various reasons and some of them are due to influence of criminal activities in their country, due to lack of education and due to weak legal actions.
Whenever a person is brought up in a country where the crime is very high then the person might be interested in getting into crime. It tends to be normal for the people who are living in the country where every day they see the crime happening in front of their eyes and they have already committed the crime so they tend to repeat it again because they do not have fear as compared to other people.For example in the country like
Afganistan the local people will be more inclined towards committing crime rather than a person who is living in Australia.
Reducing the crime rate is not an easy job but country should always try to reduce the crime rate by applying legal procedures.When there are strict rules, criminals might think twice before committing any crime.For instance, If the criminal killed a person then the criminal should be given harsh punishment such as lifelong imprisonment or death penalty.
Lack of educational background will tend to force the people to commit the crime.Whenever a person is not educated and might not get the desired employment
people might choose crime in order to earn a living.If a person cannot fill his/her desire then the person will be involved in the crime such as stealing, murder and other criminal activities.
Education should be free from the government so that the people all over the world will be able to understand the importance of life.Whenever a person is educated then they will easily find the desired job or will be involved in something creative rather than being involved in something which will create bad impact in the country. A successful person is always the one who have desired job or skilled person in their interested field.
To sum up, though there are various causes of crime happening everywhere and the governmental bodies play the top role to reduce the rate of crime by
adopting the necessary action which will definitely help to get over from crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2108.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 437.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.823798627 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55413045116 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448512585812 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 662.4 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.6745587 49.4020404114 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 234.222222222 106.682146367 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.5555555556 20.7667163134 234% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.38176352705 251% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167795268506 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865753555879 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547837269992 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854537829323 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481770007798 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.6 13.0946893788 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.22 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 11.3001002004 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.