Some people think that computers have made life mush easier and less complicated. Others believe that computers have made their lives more stressful. Which do you agree with and why?
Some people think that computers make our lives more complicated. They think with the invention of computer people become more stress and busy. Although I understand their point of view, I have a different opinion. i believe that computers make our lives more easy than before. the basis of my opinion is social, economical and personal.
Socially speaking, people nowadays can easily communicate with each other. People can talk to each other every day; they can send emails immediately to make their work less complicated. On the other hand in the past it was too hard for people to talk to each other, it took forever to reach some one from other country. Moreover, business companies in the past were dealing with paper work and they were really hurting by wasting so mush time. Therefore the computer nowadays has made our social life so easy.
Economically, computers help save money. In today world it becomes so easy for many people to buy and sell any items through the computer. For example, any body just can surf the computer by typing one word and he can easily find what he needs. People do not have to leave their home and wasting time and money by driving their cars to the shopping centers. They can save money by purchase their need from online. Hence computers help people to save money which makes their lives easier.
Personally, I have used the compute for my education. it becomes more convenient for me to learn through the computer. Today there are many online classes available that help me to learn and improve. For example, I want to improve my writing as well as my speaking, it becomes so easy to apply for online class and learn more. i do not have drive to college, wasting my time and my effort on driving. However in the past before the advent of the computers, all students should go to schools to learn. Computers make ours lives more convenient and save our time and effort in education.
In conclusion, computers inventions make our lives less difficult than before. Nowadays computers helped us to communicate easily, computer save our time and money, in the mean time computers are really helpful for me educationally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83689839572 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44720775929 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483957219251 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7780920871 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.36 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.96 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342629791966 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103191534123 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806902784306 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195920373417 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742971238566 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.