Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective.
• comics
• books
• radio
• television
• film
• theatre
It is true that multimedia has positives and negatives effects which are books, television and film. While I accept that communication media can sometimes have benefits effect on the use, I believe that they are more likely to have harmful impacts.
Books are the witness of history and the human source from which human gain knowledge. Firstly, the scientists wrote the result of the research laid on base new technologies. For example, the Gaussian algorithm is the best formula to use for image processing major. Secondly, the publications always share experiences or methods with the readers. To illustrate that Vietnamese study “Dac nhan tam book” which gives the fantastic manner.
Viewed from different sides, books are not vivid like the TV or film, today, the man usually spend hours on watching TV programs. In particular, the TV set is a popular device in each household as an example almost families in Ho Ho Chi Minh City have at least 2 televisions. To contrary, it is considered type things of making children become autistic and laziness that is a result why the percentage of the young people are more and more obesity.
In additional films are the greatest way to relaxation. The first, watching a movie like reading an interesting book with real action a special effect on the screen which brings the audiences to have a feeling that is owner of the good journey. The second, it is still having various kind of film own violent content which traumatising psychology of the youth. As a result, the young man is more aggressive and a cause of crime.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of media communication are more significant than the possible benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Ho
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, kind of, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96864111498 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78606672674 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616724738676 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0906397297 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147209149837 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448634570762 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331802566631 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777336990893 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224762631277 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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