Information revolution has changed the way of mass communication and had some negative effects on individual lives as well on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, there is a heated debate among people about the importance of new inventions. There are a great number of individuals who interpret the impacts of modern technologies as constructive, while others hold an opponent’s view. I am inclined to believe that modernity brings a tremendous amount of convenience to our life, whereas it has some negative points.
There is no skepticism surrounding the fact that technologies have made our life easier and more comfortable. Furthermore, people enjoy higher standard of living. To be more precise, with the advent of cutting edge technologies such as cell phone and Internet, people are able to keep up with the latest news in their everyday life. In other words, social media such as Face book and Twitter have brought the world close together.
On the other hand, modern life is associated with many physical and psychological disorders such as depression and obesity. Nowadays, frequent addiction to these gadgets leads to feeling of isolation and being alienated. Moreover, being overweight would undoubtedly lead to a tremendous number of cardiovascular and respiratory diseases. To be more specific, a survey conducted by Yale University in 2015 has found that spending too much time in front of computer surfing the net, will enormously deteriorate the children’s eyesight.
In a nutshell, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that technological breakthroughs could facilitate our everyday life which leads to detrimental impacts on people’s health. From my point of view, the benefits of these advancements far outweigh their drawbacks. It is recommended that parents take cognizance of these facts and restrict their children playing a lot of time with computer games.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48161764706 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16266873191 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5645300846 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0189862719489 0.242375264174 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00667710623479 0.0925447433944 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0176610078158 0.071462118173 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0138607771751 0.151781067708 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240075702996 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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