The chart illustates how the diffrent Countries expenditures on six consumer good. The four nations are- Germany,Italy,France and Britain. It is evident that the British are the Highest amount spender on all the products.
To begin with Germany, It spend between 140 and 150,000 pounds on all the products, while Italy also splurge in the same range except in the case of Toys and Photographics Film. Where it reached a peak of almost 150,000 pounds mark.
French do not spend a high amount of money on Perfume and Tennis Racquets. They spend a large amount on CD and Toys which is just little than 160,000 pounds which is climbs to 170,000 pounds for Film.
The British shell out least almost 150,000 pounds on Personal Stereos and Tennis Racquets. In contrary to that, they spend a huge amount on perfume,CD and Toys. Whereas this country spending on Film being excess of 170,000 pounds.
In conclude, British are the top spender on all the products while Germany are less amount spender on all product except perfume and Tennis Racquets.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Italy
...umer good. The four nations are- Germany,Italy,France and Britain. It is evident that ...
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Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spends'?
Suggestion: spends
... products. To begin with Germany, It spend between 140 and 150,000 pounds on all t...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , CD
...hat, they spend a huge amount on perfume,CD and Toys. Whereas this country spending...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94915254237 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57483357649 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564971751412 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0719197622 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6363636364 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0776017212845 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365528758173 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464458042701 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0511924682073 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569791821788 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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