do you agree or disagree?? the young people should try different jobs before they decide which job or career they will choose in the long term.
The question is whether a person should try a wide range of jobs before choosing the main career for future or not. Everyone with regard to his private view point and abilities may maintain a specific direction toward this statement, however, based on a done research by sociologists, some believe attempting for several career can be kind of waste of time while others claim experiencing such great opportunities provides a huge number of merits for the young. It should be confessed that I am unanimous with the latter group, so the next paragraphs will vastly elucidate my vantage point through three noticeable reasons:
To begin with, when one makes effort to work in a variety of occupations, as a matter a fact, he will be involved in new and different challenges. Overcoming and adapting such hard conditions will cause the mentioned person boost his personal skills. One should not forget that confronting with a great number of challenges can help employees to gain a deep understand about themselves that in what work they act better or in what skill they are weak. With having a total view, the young will be able to select the best choice based on their abilities.
The second reason for my argument lies the reality is that when people experience diverse types of jobs, they have an opportunity to compare their income with the cost of their life. It can be said that one the biggest problems in the modern world which is wrestling economic crisis, is that human beings would manage their financial matters such as tuition fee of universities, bills, rents and loans and list goes on. Such great circumstance can assist living beings to make decision which job is appropriate for supplying the costs of their life.
Moreover, working in different situations can add a lot of worthwhile experiences to the young people's resume. Nowadays, the most companies prefer to hire employees who have several crafts instead of an employee with lack of skill. Nobody could overlook this fact that today's any company or factory does not like to invest on someone with low quality of crafts and knowledge because he can make a huge number of errors.
To sum up, this conclusion could be drawn that advantages of working in various type of careers outweigh its disadvantages because this position can prepare the young to decide logically
about their long-term job with total perspective.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 314, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun career seems to be countable; consider using: 'several careers'.
Suggestion: several careers
...ciologists, some believe attempting for several career can be kind of waste of time while othe...
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rent challenges. Overcoming and adapting such hard conditions will cause the ment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, while, kind of, such as, to begin with, to sum up, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96526054591 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62793331967 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605459057072 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.7700296695 48.9658058833 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.923076923 100.406767564 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.6045352989 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195241464842 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699808518425 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060377917228 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101043033509 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437074306513 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 11.7677419355 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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