People in community now could buy cheaper consumer goods. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
These days, consumers are able to provide their routine needs with a wider range of possibility. Although there are some benefits could be seen in economic situation, I believe drawbacks of this growing trend are more significant.
There is always a balance between supply and demand in market. By decreasing the fixed price of some products, increase in the request value is an obvious result. This trend could be beneficial for society in terms of providing more job opportunity for job seekers, causing industries to improve their product’s process to fulfill consumer’s desires. Furthermore, with regards to lower price, low budget people will be attracted to purchasing products even in large scale and it could lead to fostering the general prosperity of a country’s economy. However, all these mentioned benefits cannot overshadow the disadvantages.
In many countries, especially developing ones, whenever demanding for products risen enormously, their quality will dropped after a while. With regard to growing pattern of decreasing prices, the matter of price comes forward more than before and profit will become a primary concern for businesses. So, local products, due to their higher quality and total cost, would face with an unfair competition with importation stuffs, such as Chinese products all around the globe which cause lots of trouble for local industries. As a result, they forced to lessen their quality to stay at market and after a short time, people will gradually lose their trust on domestic manufacturer. In addition, by growing consumerism behavior in society, the amount of wastes will rising enormously, such expansion would have grave side effects to environment.
In overall, although providing low price merchandises could be fruitful at first glance, it has some long lasting drawbacks which could be a significant treat for all society members.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'drop'
Suggestion: drop
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'rise'
Suggestion: rise
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, while, in addition, such as, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41275167785 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75701111901 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620805369128 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5916446418 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.076923077 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0644775156765 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0223976258001 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253116412207 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0486954891499 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021551477137 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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