The world natural resources are being consumed at an ever-increased rate. What are the dangers of this situation? What should we do?
It is true that consuming the world natural resources grows up more and more quickly in recent years. The phenomenon causes several dangerous consequences, but this can be addressed by reducing energy in practical ways.
The situation exerts an effect on both environment and economic. Firstly, environmental degradation can be occurred by the products of using natural resources such as emissions, polluted air. For example, carbon dioxide is the main reason why ozone layer depletion takes place as well as the green house effect. It is a contributing factor in global warming. Secondly, although economic of the country can be derived benefits from using natural resources, it also causes numerous dangerous disasters which damage the public infrastructure such as typhoon, earthquake. Therefore, the government has to pay much money in order to solve total destruction.
The authorities should take some immediate measures to solve this issue effectively. One solution that they have to impose and enforce the new laws to protect and preserve natural resources. In this way, the sustainable level of the use of natural resources must be determined and breaking the rules has to severely punished. On the other hand, the obvious answer is to discover and use the renewable energy. For instance, instead of oils, gasoline, many countries around the world try to encourage inhabitants to use bioenergy which is not harmful to the environment.
In conclusion, overconsumption of natural resources worldwide is having major impacts and immediate measures are called for to mitigate the consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44176706827 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00749857199 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646586345382 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.658859516 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7857142857 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7857142857 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203790988562 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608293908375 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488135927182 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118801560645 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410663815073 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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