Fewer and fewer people walk on a daily basis. What are the reasons and how to encourage them to spend their time walking?
In this contemporary life, many individuals are losing their habit of walking. While there a variety of reasons for this tendency, some measurements have been put in place to encourage dwellers to spend more time to go on foot.
In my perspective, there are two main reasons why recent residents do not walk frequently in daily life. Firstly, the development of technologies has restricted citizens to spend less time to walk. Elevator and lift have appeared all over the world from small town to big cities, especially in shopping malls and office buildings. We have to admit that these equipment are, absolutely, so convenient and time-saving though they have become reasons for laziness. Secondly, it belongs to a part of modern lifestyle, car is the most popular vehicles people travel every day, not only for business but also for personal reasons without the consideration about the distance. For example, latter-day parents often pick up their children in front of school gates by car, even when school is near their houses. In some aspects, these things can be understood, especially when the way from home to schools need to pass through many crowded towns, and the youth can not to it by themselves if their parents do not want to guide them how.
To encourage inhabitants to walk more regularly, some solutions have conducted. In some low buildings, it is compulsory to use stairs, just only one lift for the disabled. In order to limit the number of unnecessary cars, authorities should establish a no parking area around schools. If children become familiar with the routine of walking to school day by day, their parents have responsibilities for being with them. Thus, family will get used to walking exercises. One more solution is to upgrade pedestrian sidewalks and set up more walking street for only footsloggers in the central heart of the cities. Streets with a lot of green trees around can curb the amount of rain and sunlight for walkers.
To sum up, we can find out what the reasons why individuals walk less, and some simple measurement should be given to improve people's awareness about what benefit walking can bring to our health and community. Civil should go on their walk instead of using modern transportation.
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...hildren in front of school gates by car, even when school is near their houses. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96286472149 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74511332985 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599469496021 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1721450172 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.944444444 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9444444444 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259495830633 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793313036491 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602526116825 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160265741368 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418030153244 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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