it is better to have a a tour guide while you are traveling
Some people think that traveling alone without a tour guide is more interesting. People think that tour guide limits their freedom. Although I under stand their point of view, I have a different opinion. I believe that traveling with a tour guide is the best way to travel. The basis of my opinion is financial and social.
From the financial perspective, having a tour guide in a long trip will save money. People every where travel to enjoy their time. They pay a lot of money to entertain. If people organize their trip right and use a tour guide , that will help them to have better time in the journey. For example, from the beginning tour guide would help to reserve the best hotel. He also provides us with a lot of deals and offers. He guide us to the best places. He will help us to save our money, as we some time choose the wrong places, but because he is expertise in his career he will lead us to the good and cheapest places where we can enjoy our time without wasting too much money. Although, some people may think that having a tour guide is a waste of money, it is completely the opposite havening a tour guide will help us to enjoy more and save our money. That is why I think it is a good idea to have a tour guide I a long prepared trip.
it is also very reasonable that the tour guide will save our time. When we travel to a trip for a specific period of time we do not want to waste our time searching for the best places. If we have a tour guide in our trip that will help us to save our time and enjoy our trip. For instance, a tour guide know the best historical places in the area. He will guide us to the ancient places to enjoy our time. If we have children the tour guide will suggest us other places suitable for kids. Although some parents think that having a tour guide in the tripe will limit their freedom, as they will be required to procced the tour guide rules. However, it ended up the trip became more organized and all the family members enjoy their time. It is essential for those people who want to enjoy and save their time to have a tour guide.
In conclusion for the reasons I stated above I think I is better idea for all the people who want to enjoy and entertain to have a tour guide. The tour guide will help people to save their money as he guides them to the best and cheapest places. Moreover, the tour guide will allow people to enjoy their time better, without wasting any minute. He knows the important places to be visited
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2074.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 486.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26748971193 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15053561008 2.67179642975 80% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.358024691358 0.524837075471 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5550700176 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1739130435 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1304347826 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31490466087 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137332251122 0.076458572812 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094598202803 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259182534462 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033166157621 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 58.1214874552 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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