In cities, an increasing number of people do not know their neighbors. There is no longer sense of community. what do you think are the causes of this problem and suggest methods to solve it?
In the pace of globalization and urbanization, the trend is expanding of the individual do not have the foggiest idea about their neighbor, which has never happened in history. there are the plethora of causes of this trend but I will endeavor to elucidate briefly and will suggest few idea in the following essay.
In this fast-paced era, two family income is necessary to meet both ends and better future prospects, which leads to time shortage, which is the main factor that people avoid interaction with their neighbors. More to it, in this cut-throat competition, it becomes compulsory for children to acquire higher grade in the academic curriculum so parents have to engage with them even after long working hours. In addition, an invention of modern technology also plays a part in this introvert society. To exemplify, sitting against the site comes or surfing on internet stops people to enjoy the outing.
To suggest that one should interact with their neighbors and share the same interest and they should participate in neighborhood activity.neighbors should plan to together or picnic and enjoy the each other company. Moreover, they should invite next door for dinner so they can know about each other well.
In conclusion, Individual should spare some time for their neighbors and interact with them. There is a proverb that"your close neighbor is better than your faraway brother.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: There
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Suggestion: few ideas
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19298245614 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80781238746 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640350877193 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5092224752 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.4 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124736003806 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045211190686 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280170446209 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671128440455 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382695236771 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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