Do you agree or disagree? The way people dresses is a good indication of his or her personality or character.
Although some people adamantly claim that it would be unfair if we judje the personality or character of other unfamiliar people according to their clothes and appearance, others take an opposite point of view toward this opinion and provide some rational reasons. Personally, I am of the belief that the people’ appearance could be good indication of their intrinsic personality. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
The first reason that immediately comes to mind is that people choose the clothes according to their interests and priorities. Now, we live in a world in which most of the people have enough freedom to choose their favourite clothes. Besides, there are myriad of different styles that could be chosen by individuals regarding their interests. For example, I can remember when I was an elementary student, I was scorned by my classmates because my dress was aften out-dated and old fashioned. The problem originated from this issue that my mother always chose my dress and, in most cases, the clothes were black and grey despite my temprament which was humorous and happy. Unfortunately, I had no opportunity to select one and never tried to change this process. After a while, I decided to make my appearance according to my favourite style. So I talked to my mother and asked her to give me the opportunity to do this. Fortunately, she was open minded and after that I purchase what I loved which were colourful dresses. So it seems to be fair if we assert that appearance is a great indication of nitrinsic values.
Another argument which could be said about this topic is that now people dress meticulously not to judje incorrectly. We live in era in which we have accessibility to a huge amount of data so we are well-informed about different lifestyles and, as well as, a various assortment of dressing and the consequences which is others’ interpretations about us. For instance, I know a boy who lives near us. He looks so strange because he always dresses the clothes that are so different and they don’t match together. Even though, in most times, he seems to be a little crazy, I recently found out that he dress intentionally this way since he is studying fashion in the university and want to assess the people reaction to his designs. That’s why I think that most of the people kniw this fact that the surrounding people always evaluate them.
All in all, although there are some cases in which people are forced to wear a certain type of clothes like muslim women in I slamic country or the people who make their appearance different because of their beliefs or religion, in many parts of the country people are free and could select their own dress. From my perspective, not only people choose a unique appearance to introduce themselves to others, but also they are enough informed about others’ interepretations so it could be a good indaction of their personality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, regarding, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, as well as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2470.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 507.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87179487179 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88110526672 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506903353057 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 789.3 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5922917997 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.619047619 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157664448362 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466632988516 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378193318669 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102272896484 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241364738646 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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