What is your opinion regarding the future of e-Learning?
Nowadays, all the young siblings are concentrating on online courses rather than the days scholar college. According to my experience and knowledge, the online courses would not have enough and bright future for the people.
The education system has a lot of mode which we could improve our career and mental developments. But it should be in a generous and proper way to acheive it. The students would mingle with the other students and teachers will make a hardship experience in their life to know and study of people's mind. It has many advantanges such as attitudes improvements, social welfare and sharing the knowledge as well. So it would be a very fantastic journey in the days scholar life.
The above same things would not happened to the online courses or e-learning courses. It is one of individual study system and isolated part which we never partner with our neighbors for any purposes. If we have any doubts regarding our subjects, it never gets clarified with the professor, lectures and colleagues to understand the difficult concept. So we always missed a lot of direct communicative experience in e-learning courses.
In conclusion, the university courses would be splendid for our prosperous future not the e-learnings. The exposures never compared with the website learnings and it could not cause any wealth for our future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...ating on online courses rather than the days scholar college. According to my experi...
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Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun mode seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of modes'.
Suggestion: a lot of modes
...the people. The education system has a lot of mode which we could improve our career and m...
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Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...ould be a very fantastic journey in the days scholar life. The above same things ...
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Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
...ife. The above same things would not happened to the online courses or e-learning cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10810810811 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81353817784 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581081081081 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.0615809604 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.2307692308 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0826235318805 0.242375264174 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0296627422592 0.0925447433944 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323713333054 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0524917567209 0.151781067708 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353426519378 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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