Has polygamy increased widely in this modern and brutal life? How far do you agree with this statement?
The polygamy has been multiplied in the recent period and cruel life. According to my perception, I am confidently disagreed with this statement. It could not be depending upon the era which will rule over this action.
On the one hand, some group of people are believing mostly on the period which dominates this issue like polygamy. Their strong argument is the recent development in mass media and communication modem spoils the culture of the marriage system and in turns lead to polygamy. The programs telecasted in the television and serials are overplaying in the life of the couples and deviate them due to the physical appearance. Another important problem is communicating media, it would make the opposite sex to contact freely and smoothly in the society which creates an illegal bond with them. It is one of the main reason of the polygamy.
On the other hand, multiple marriage is not overcome only in the modern days. It had existed more in the olden days compared to the modern days, even the percentage is very negligible. In the ancient days, the polygamy was not a big sin which it considered by the society and life partner. It would be easily arranged by the family member itself and headed by the social leaders as well. So, the polygamy would be more countable in the olden days and it flowed through the people in a nice way.
In conclusion, there is no doubt from my side that polygamy would not increase in this scientific years and reciprocally it was more in the non-systematic middle age. I disagree with this point which was non-fundamental and no evidence for more polygamy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n days and it flowed through the people in a nice way. In conclusion, there is no doubt fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80935251799 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70876684776 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557553956835 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6094098408 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1333333333 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202004504041 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638931346418 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534770980246 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128956060698 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655580172421 0.0609392437508 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.