Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
There is no doubt that nowadays, tasks in the jobs play a crucial role in daily people's lives. No one can deny the effects of various and kind of tasks on workers who work for factories or governments. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is what kind of tasks in jobs are more interested in a worker. Some people may hold this viewpoint that it is better to have similar and consistent tasks in all of the day. However, some others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that when workers have many different and various types of tasks in during workday are more interested. I firmly subscribe to the idea, the reasons I think so are manifold, which will be discussed widely hereunder.
First and foremost, in today's with an improving technology and using them in the ordinary life, people like to doing anything which they are enjoying. By doing so, workers do not like the same tasks in during a day, but rather enjoy from varied tasks. The reason from a psychology standpoint, the people are doing the same works, they had exhausted and tedious after this work, in near futures workers will become anxious and wary.
Secondly, income and yield is an essential part of every job, if factories define various tasks for their workers in during a day, they will be more effective and doing their task with a high effort and endeavor. Therefore, their works as paving the way for people to reach the zenith a high prosperous. On the other hand, an empirical study in the Asia shows that most factories define the same tasks for their workers have less effective and yield, also the companies not only become more stagnation and recession in their budget, but being in predicament of business programming.
The last but not the least reason is that in every works for flourishing need a context due to convincing workers to utilize their intelligence in their tasks, because of they find suitable path even solve hiding difficulties in a simple way. By doing so, when employee confronts with a lot of tasks, which cause some ideas and an innovative approach are evoked in their mind. In order to, the factories will deal with drawbacks and weakness in the excellent ways.
To wrap it up, it is my profound belief that defines the many different tasks in during day worker can be enjoyed, more efficient, and innovative in their works.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 428, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...to have similar and consistent tasks in all of the day. However, some others may take an o...
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Line 1, column 531, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...oint and believe that when workers have many different and various types of tasks in during wo...
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Line 4, column 161, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...lize their intelligence in their tasks, because of they find suitable path even solve hiding di...
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Line 4, column 227, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a simple way" with adverb for "simple"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ble path even solve hiding difficulties in a simple way. By doing so, when employee confronts w...
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Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... is my profound belief that defines the many different tasks in during day worker can be enjoy...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ficient, and innovative in their works.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, even so, i think, kind of, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75302663438 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48897456819 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520581113801 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2748812753 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.6875 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8125 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363617266615 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118880629636 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945199985494 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197756201092 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648841358966 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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