It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The substantial influences of being in emotional relation at the early age have sparked a controversy amongst the public. Although specific arguments claimed that students marriages are beneficial, a group of intellectuals debate otherwise and hold opponent's view. I am highly inclined to believe that school certificate is a must do and have been supported widely by communities. The agenda of this article is to analyze both sides of the argument and will lead to a legitimate conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why child marriages are supported, but the most remarkable one lies in the fact that they join job markets sooner. Based on a recent study result, which conducted by a group of profound social psychologists from a renowned university, 85% of employees with high school degree get fired after 5 years. Moreover, raising a baby and having a family is costly, time-consuming, and lead to a depression. So the correlation between leaving school and family sustainability, family economic, child psychology, family strength, as well as job satisfaction is obvious.
Contrary to popular belief, there remain drawbacks clouded up the potential influences late marriages. The most alarming one rooted in the fact that old couples are less intended to have more than two kids. For instance, my parents were getting married when they are over 35, and I do not have any sibling. Hence, getting occupation before finishing high and its detriments which may have effect adversely on life satisfaction, future wealth, personal achievements, raising kids, and professional opportunities can be seen with clarity.
To recapitulate, while there are several divergent opinions on both sides, my sentiment is that graduate from school gets more credence than getting married or finding office positions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3986013986 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04456122037 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 139.433497537 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667832167832 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0948579388 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.769230769 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175348162609 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502012758541 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05794444117 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105170357472 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519148361832 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 55.0591133005 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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