Dear Dan,
I hope this letter finds you well. Here I am writing regarding my rent for the month of December 2017. As I am facing some financial difficulties, I would like to pay my rent one week later from the date we commonly agreed.
Probably you know I have changed my job recently, and joined my new company on 20th of December. Since I have worked only for the half of the month, my salary for this month will be prorated. I have received only half month salary from my old company. The payment-day of my new company is different than the old one. They only pay on the first day of the next month. Since 1st January is a holiday, I can get my salary on 2nd January. Currently, I only have the half month salary from my old office, and I am waiting for the salary from my new office.
The money I have is not enough to pay you the rent for this month, and therefore would like to request you allow me to pay your rent on next month on 2nd Jan 2018. However, if it is too difficult for you to adjust, I can manage to pay you half of the rent on 27th December. I am very sorry for the inconvenience caused. I hope you can understand my situation and allow me to pay my rent on next month.
I look forward to your kind acceptance and wish you a very happy Christmas and New year 2018.
Thanks and Regards
Somdeep
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 300, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...ment-day of my new company is different than the old one. They only pay on the first...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...low me to pay my rent on next month. I look forward to your kind acceptance an...
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Line 10, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and New year 2018. Thanks and Regards Somdeep
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 5.60731707317 803% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 258.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.18217054264 4.92477711251 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28544499356 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46511627907 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7025128885 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.4375 112.824112599 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 16.125 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243499456349 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091674273971 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103759907471 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150466720092 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128118150456 0.0819641961636 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 13.2329268293 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 11.4140731707 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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