Traveling overseas to study is overrated. We have brilliant scholars who have studied locally. In your opinion, is travel really required for higher studies? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience
In this days, traveling to abroad for education is many important. Although there are scientists who have studied in their own countries, need to study in advanced countries have many advantages for students who study in. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss why I agree with this viewpoint.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support that travel really required for higher studies. At first, while the study in overseas has some difficulties, by study in advanced countries students learn recent sciences. They can learn this knowledge in the reputed universities besides the best professors. For example, there are many universities like Harvard University with the high-level reputation in the knowledge that is respectable for authorities all around the world.
In addition, It is not beneficial for their own countries, if the students remain in overseas after graduation. However, it can create many opportunities for them. They can get a good job or even reach a high-level position. For instance, there are many Iranian scientists that got a job in best organizations such as Nasa and Google and also are in a top position in their companies.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I believe the benefits of education in abroad are far outweighed of its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, really, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1712962963 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9333261726 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7112972309 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0833333333 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.25397266985 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241192633186 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848167346449 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986394045126 0.071462118173 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128747020648 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107096342669 0.0609392437508 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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