In this days, traveling to abroad for education is many important. Although there are scientists who have studied in their own countries, need to study in advanced countries have many advantages for students who study in. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss why I agree with this viewpoint.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support that travel really required for higher studies. At first, while the study in overseas has some difficulties, by study in advanced countries students learn recent sciences. They can learn this knowledge in the reputed universities besides the best professors. For example, there are many universities like Harvard University with the high-level reputation in the knowledge that is respectable for authorities all around the world.
In addition, It is not beneficial for their own countries, if the students remain in overseas after graduation. However, it can create many opportunities for them. They can get a good job or even reach a high-level position. For instance, there are many Iranian scientists that got a job in best organizations such as Nasa and Google after graduation and also they are now in a top position in their companies.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I believe the benefits of education in abroad are far outweighed of its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, really, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17727272727 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9295128357 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581818181818 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1351302504 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9166666667 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.25397266985 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236951540293 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846601808912 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987463288295 0.071462118173 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127885493872 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107728210983 0.0609392437508 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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