The idea of space travel is fantastic these days and scientists are very fascinated towards it. However, there are many environmental problems in our planet that we should resolve first before considering space travel that would cost a significant sum. What is your opinion? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.
Nowadays, space travel is a great idea and scientists have always been planning it. But the heavy budget of the space travel can be dedicated to solving environmental issues in our planet. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss some of these harmful problems.
In my opinion, there are various reasons that governments should solve the environmental problems before spending for travel to other planets.At first, although traveling to space can help astronomies to learn more about mysterious of the creation, care of our planet against pollutions is a priority. For example, we should prevent producing the greenhouse gases is an important problem that damaged the Ozone layer and also is the cause global warming.
In addition, scientists think space travel is beneficial to find a new and clean planet for the living, but many people in the earth need to help from the international community. For instance, there are a significant number of poor and hungry people in Africa that need to food and clothes. the human work is spending their money to feed these people, those wealthy countries that are planning to send their scientists to space.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about this fantastic travel, my personal sentiment is that advantages of solving the issues of the earth are more important before thinking of space travel that is costly for governments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14410480349 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72447791071 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576419213974 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.7542100972 50.4703680194 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.888888889 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2222222222 7.25397266985 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363308321844 0.242375264174 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138998585308 0.0925447433944 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752580678917 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213457158854 0.151781067708 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518631821927 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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