Producers or the consumers should be held responsible to avoid the over-packaged products.
The moot question is where it is the responsibility of the consumers or the producers to avoid the over-packaged products. I will advocate the later part and will provide reasons to support my viewpoint.
The packaging of the product ensures that it is being served in the best presentable manner and under high hygienic conditions. Due to a large number of manufacturing companies, there is much more competition than ever before. Much investment is being done in improving the quality of the packaging, which requires the intake of more resources and therefore increases the price ultimately. This extra price is being born to the customer.
From the customer's perspective, what matters the most is the quality of the product inside the package. The physical appearance of the package leaves a minute impact if the consumer is satisfied with the standard of the product for which he has invested, this does not mean that the wrapping of the product is completely ignored tough but consuming extra for the dashing physical appearance of the product is neither justifiable.
In the conclusion and the in the view of the above-presented points, the producers of the product are to be held more responsible to avoid the over-packaged product, instead of investing more in the packaging, they should strive to improve the quality of the product in order to make it more appealing.
- Placing advertisements in the schools is good or bad. 77
- Producers or the consumers should be held responsible to avoid the over-packaged products. 77
- Does law induce a change in the people's behavior? 85
- Dangerous activities like extremeskiing, bungee jumping etc. and whether u support them or not. 88
- In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes andcomputers. What do you think is the most important of them? Why? Greatest invention in the last100 years, medicine, science or technology? 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... under high hygienic conditions. Due to a large number of manufacturing companies, there is much ...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
...eing born to the customer. From the customers perspective, what matters the most is t...
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Line 5, column 431, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of the product is neither justifiable. In the conclusion and the in the view of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98445173175 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539473684211 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 365.4 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.6391204402 50.4703680194 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.777777778 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 7.25397266985 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31158730708 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122447561281 0.0925447433944 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168109393873 0.071462118173 235% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187814045418 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110233391513 0.0609392437508 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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