Schools are spending more time teaching traditional subjects such as history. some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students find a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people agree over the time spent in school and subjects that have not much value for students on the future. I hardly disagree with these people
Looking at the statistics shown conducted by a research in modern countries, students from schools which spend some time on teaching abilities relevant to the work environment, are more efficient when it comes to working in companies and production facilities. for example, a research conducted by Yale university has recently shown that a school which spent more time on general and traditional subjects had 7% more unemployed students than a school which had ((work skills)) courses, some tend to believe that the disadvantages on life outside of work outweighs the advantages on work
In some countries it is believed that traditional values can cause an awareness of some mistakes happened in the past or some cultures around our local residence. In my own experience, those who know traditional values seem to be more mature than those who do not, even though they might not be better in every social aspect of life, they seem to know when to talk, when to stay out of an argument or when to interfere, looking at their track records, it seems that they do not make the mistakes that others frequently make
To recapitulate, I personally believe that having enough maturity in social life is just as important as being efficient in the workplace or maybe even more, and I think that the pros of learning those lessons overcome the cons of not learning work abilities,it is recommended that the school timetable gets divided to make enough time for both lessons.
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- Some experts believe is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary schooldo the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 61
- Schools are spending more time teaching traditional subjects such as history. some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students find a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Schools are spending more time teaching traditional subjects such as history. some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students find a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 79
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...in companies and production facilities. for example, a research conducted by Yale u...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to work'
Suggestion: to work
...ssons overcome the cons of not learning work abilities,it is recommended that the sc...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... the cons of not learning work abilities,it is recommended that the school timetabl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92335766423 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67116636232 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 223.921861371 49.4020404114 453% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 337.25 106.682146367 316% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.5 20.7667163134 330% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284674277861 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184250216836 0.084324248473 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459791563193 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16109596313 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651876240565 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.0 13.0946893788 275% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.92 50.2224549098 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 11.3001002004 253% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.44 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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