Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Since the beginning of mankind history crime is an integral part of our society. In the modern world, too Governments around the globe are worried about tackling this problem, and punishments are result of it. Some people believe there must be fixed punishments for each type of crime, while others argue to look into circumstances of an individual crime.
To begin with, people who hold view of fixed punishment put forward multiple reasons for it. First and foremost is this due to increasing crime rate authorities and community members feel insecure, and two deter against it stricter penalties must be given because it will not only make people think twice before committing illegal actions, but will also prevent younger generation especially teenagers not to go on that dark road. Another reason is by giving punishment to the culprit gives justice to the victim and his family as well.
Having said this, it is also thought by some that circumstances must also be taken into consideration before embarking on penalty. For example, a person killing other in self defence does not make him a serial killer. Similarly, stealing bread in time of famine is not seen as theft in some communities. It is therefore essential to look at the situation during which crime was committed to prevent an innocent going to jail.
To conclude, though some holds the view that there must be fixed punishment for every crime, whereas it is frequently believed by some that circumstances must also be looked. In my opinion, it is of extreme importance to look into details of every crime, but also authorities must device a way, so that people will not take advantage of it, and Justice must prevail. In the future also this trend must continue.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, similarly, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94880546075 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62990931817 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590443686007 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.5834518045 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348708360895 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122656166915 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138538228815 0.0667982634062 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227800448205 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972500498823 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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