What are your views on gender equality? Do you think gender bias still exists in the modern society?
It is irrefutable to say that however modern, educated we call our self gender inequality happens one way or the other with us in day to day life.In the past gender inequality was visible distinctly in the society but as time has changed people have accepted female equally in society. However, not all part of the world is same, and still there are places where womens are not treated equally as men. In this essay i wil discuss both the views and deduce a reasonable conclusion.
To begin with, female of past used to face unequality in different forms as the society is misogenistic and women were always dominated by the men one way or the other. Furthermore, women were not allowed to vote, educate or even give their opinion and were treted as objects to do house hold activities. Lack of education and confined in household activities hundered them from growing professionally , so were limited to houses. For instance, if we look at the history we find very less women in the topnotch position in offices.
On the contary, the situations has changed and we see many women in workplaces, ruling countries. For instance, the queen of Britan has been in the throne from around 80 years which it self is a achivement of women empowerment. Moreover, there many national and international agencies working for the empowerment of women. For instance, a international organization is working for women education in a rural village of Nepal. And the women literacy rate of that village is higher than that of men.That is a small step to reduce gender inequality.
To recapitulate, the world has become more accepting in ways but things like equal pay at work , bias in working situations still prevails in the society.As the society is mysogynistic , until and unless we educate men about equality and women are not just objects, i think this will remain in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, for instance, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85625 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76896866271 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4303299654 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.538461538 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148926540174 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427589341027 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529029868709 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962143375774 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715070307489 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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