Most Artists earn low salaries and should, therefore, receive social welfare from governments in order for them to continue their work.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Low wages for the artists is considered one of the major reason to discontinue their work. Some people suggest that artists should be supported by the government whereas other differ the notion. I agree with the idea of extending government support for deserving artists only in terms of their income and value of their work.
Some artists are really dedicated to their work and assert more attention towards their creative work rather than commercializing their art. This fact brings them under heavy financial stress and sometimes results in abandoning their professions or a compromise on the quality of their work. Gokh,for example, a famous artist in history had a very tough life due to his limited income and heavily depended upon the financial assistance from his family. Many artists, however, may not be lucky to have such generous relatives and must be supported from social welfare programs by the governments.
On the other hand, it can also be noticed that some people may take the advantage of this benefit and can hide their laziness by taking art as their profession and then relying on government support. This can be mitigated by establishing stringent criteria to evaluate their artwork before extending such financial support. This criterion can be framed and the artwork by need artist can be evaluated by the artist whom work is already established in society.
In conclusion, governments should be judicious to the deserving artists to enable them continuing their artwork. This, however, must be regulated to avoid the misuse of the facility by non-deserving individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , for
...omise on the quality of their work. Gokh,for example, a famous artist in history had...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, really, so, then, whereas, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22480620155 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75469890982 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577519379845 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8901174952 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270446073958 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114314062631 0.0925447433944 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632592637041 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179681164923 0.151781067708 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755913034031 0.0609392437508 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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