The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade.
The tabel which is given on the paper is devided by five countries, UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden. We can see sales of coffee and bananas which is sold by 1999, and 2004. And also the rate of money is millions of euors.
At theend of the 20 centuary's sales of coffee and bananas, Switzzerland has bought highest number of coffee and bananas about 3 millions of erous for coffee, and 15 million of erous for bananas. At 2004, however, the UK bought about three times more coffee than Switzerlan did which is 6 millions of erous. Unlike coffee, bananas at 2004 has been maintained at highest number of bananas, which costs 47 millions of erous.
Denmark has been used 1.8 millions of erous on coffee and 2 million of erous on bananas. Sweden have been bought bananas 1.8 millions of erous which is similar with sweden did at 1999. This rate of sales of Sweden and Denmark have been decresed about one millions of erous at 2004. Begium has rate about one million erous which is similar as Sweden's coffee rate, which is 0.8 millions of erous.
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- The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'bought the highest'.
Suggestion: bought the highest
...of coffee and bananas, Switzzerland has bought highest number of coffee and bananas about 3 mi...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '3 million'.
Suggestion: 3 million
...hest number of coffee and bananas about 3 millions of erous for coffee, and 15 million of ero...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '6 million'.
Suggestion: 6 million
...ore coffee than Switzerlan did which is 6 millions of erous. Unlike coffee, bananas at 2004 h...
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Line 3, column 401, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '47 million'.
Suggestion: 47 million
... highest number of bananas, which costs 47 millions of erous. Denmark has been used 1.8 mi...
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Line 5, column 25, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '8 million'.
Suggestion: 8 million
...s of erous. Denmark has been used 1.8 millions of erous on coffee and 2 million of erous ...
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Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...d 2 million of erous on bananas. Sweden have been bought bananas 1.8 millions of ero...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '8 million'.
Suggestion: 8 million
...anas. Sweden have been bought bananas 1.8 millions of erous which is similar with sweden did ...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: A_HUNDREDS[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. Consider using: 'one million'
Suggestion: one million
...en and Denmark have been decresed about one millions of erous at 2004. Begium has rate about...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one million', 'a million', or simply 'millions'?
Suggestion: one million; a million; millions
...en and Denmark have been decresed about one millions of erous at 2004. Begium has rate about...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: 'one million'.
Suggestion: one million
...en and Denmark have been decresed about one millions of erous at 2004. Begium has rate about on...
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Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '8 million'.
Suggestion: 8 million
...ilar as Swedens coffee rate, which is 0.8 millions of erous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61375661376 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25876975726 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.108309293 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0614756756433 0.215688989381 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345016624374 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387823824589 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0480711332677 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00818279806964 0.0819641961636 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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