Recently, the phenomenon of fast development of recent technologies and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that this rapid expansion is highly beneficial, such
issues are regarded thoroughly negative by a
substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that development of new technologies can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From many experts standpoint, this rapid development of new technologies can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that increase in safety, as well as security in different fields, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the development of recent technologies enhanced the safety in medical appliances that help to cure the diseases better than before.
Within the realm of digital, fast expansion of recent achievements might increase the speed of data processing.Moreover, fundamental aspects of costs of calculation relate to this reality that the demerits of not have the new advances pertain to high costs and expensively. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of costs in data processing is correlated positively with using the new achievements.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of the rapid development of new technologies far outweigh its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57083333333 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36884984907 2.71678728327 124% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.5990613257 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.125 104.977214359 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.9669160288 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181773003469 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758667981729 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322672344961 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800070428162 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444627053163 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 12.6369458128 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 53.1260098522 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 10.9458128079 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.32886699507 129% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 83.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 75.5 Out of 90
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