What is the best invention of the last 100 years: computer, antibiotics, airplane? Explain why.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the number of such advance findings as computer, airplane and antibiotics for human’s well-being. There is a widespread worry that which can do the most useful and effective service for the world. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious consideration.
There are numerous of factors in favor of computer technology. The most preponderant one is that although people can obtain immense of uses form all of these technological products, computer can consider as an essential part for travel, medicine and what not. Not only do computer contribute to travel and others, but it also helps to enhance the current education system. Needless to say, these merits stand people and future generation in good stead, as far as providing comfortable travel and medication for long healthy life.
Another pivotal aspect is computer can make intelligent technology and this will cause for the improvement of country’s other factors. Besides, gain advantageous things from computers, antibiotics and airplanes are also playing a major role. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of the topic.
In view of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks, benefits of the computer indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nted and merits serious consideration. There are numerous of factors in favor o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35211267606 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98157921765 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647887323944 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1898608467 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.636363636 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0410987219219 0.242375264174 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0131436229546 0.0925447433944 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.022945067703 0.071462118173 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0226655619437 0.151781067708 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168289091638 0.0609392437508 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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