The information revolution has changed the way of mass communications and had some negative and positive effects on individual lives as well as on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Changing in communication and using information has become a controversial issue among the public. Although this issue is regarded by a considerable number of inhabitants as thoroughly both constructive and positive, others hold opponent views. I am inclined to profoundly believe that this revolution is quite beneficial as it could develop some brilliant aspects for its adherents.
There are several reasons why revolution in communication in recent years is advantageous. First and foremost, this amount of information provides settlers some significant features including having easy access to information, the fast and cheap communications, boosting the speed of doing tasks in companies and some other things like these. Secondly, this subject have positive effects on education. For instance, pupils who want to conduct research or surveys do not spend a good deal amount of time in libaries on order to find the information they need. Furthermore, according to a new research which was conducted by The Tehran University, the speed of growthing the knowledge has been enhancing markly in the last ten years.
On the minus side, there is no doubt that this amount of information and the way of communication like now has some demerits. Firstly, due to this kind of access the rate of email hacking and cybercrime has increased. Moreover, this amount of information make people relatively distract and misleading information is happened among citizens.
In conclusion, while the reolution in communication has some demerits, I strongly believe that its benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51219512195 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15917217449 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2114039896 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.25397266985 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173811353054 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642982346495 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445774680686 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977421752527 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212168297277 0.0609392437508 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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