The use of newspaper will be less important in future. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Explain with reasons and examples.
Nowadays, the question of whether using a newspaper will be less critical in future or not has become a long-running dispute among people all over the world. It is a widely held view that pursuing news and information from the internet and TV is highly popular than the newspaper, whereas I tend to believe that one must be weighed up the pros and cons of this subject.
To begin with, there is a common belief that the technology as a mean for coverage news plays a vital role in every society. To put into consideration, I express several reasons why I support this issue. First and foremost is that people can follow the prominent news online from everywhere and in every time, from any workplace, university to school. Secondly, it can be argued that access to the information from the Internet is more likely cheaper that newspapers and magazines. In addition to this information, it should be mention that they can see video and picture of everything that is reading. A group of journalists and reporters, working in a prestigious university conducted that the pace of accessing news by new technologies is far more than newspapers.
However, there is no doubt that reading news from newspapers provides people with positive points. It should be taken into account that old people find using new technologies for informing press very hard so that they prefer to read the news in the traditional way, such as the newspaper. Moreover, the expense of accessing the Internet for developing countries is excessively high, so they are willing to read news from the paper.
To recapitulate, I entirely agree that something must be taken into consideration. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
Nowadays, the question of whether using a newspaper will be less critical...
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Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ss critical in future or not has become a long-running dispute among people all over the world...
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Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'mentioned'?
Suggestion: mentioned
...ition to this information, it should be mention that they can see video and picture of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, in addition, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 306.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01307189542 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88210097753 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571895424837 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.493832596 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156768895342 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056933499116 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422033075024 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904726529805 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320407911165 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.