Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on individuals & Society. To what extent do you agree?
Ever since the dawn of the internet and it's related technologies, many people are leveraged by social networking websites like Facebook, Twitter, to name a few. Many people argue and condemning the usage and existence of these social networking sites due to its detrimental effects. This essay will explain how these sites will reduce the productivity of an individual and secondly, will describe its impacts on the society.
Many young adolescents and working professional tend to waste their productive time in accessing Facebook and Twitter. These individuals constantly check their smart devices for status updates and other feeds from this sites which will eventually take a major portion of their working or study time. As a result, many professional fails to achieve their targets and many students fail to pass their exam. For instance, many universities across the globe have banned their students using smartphone inside the campus to make them study. Presumably, social networking sites reduces the effectiveness of the students and professional.
Furthermore, these websites are insidious to our society and cause mental health issues. Overuse of these social networking applications or sites causes addiction among its users. Additionally, many individual lose the human touch and are influenced by the interface of these sites which is very bad for their health and their family. To illustrate these effect, the researcher from Oxford University has confirmed that chronic condition is directly related to overuse of social building websites. Resultantly, these sites are degenerating our society by causing an adverse health issue.
This essay described the ways in which social networking sites negatively influence our society and it's individuals. In my opinion, social networking sites have already caused enough damages to the current generation and we need to preserve the future generation by restricting them with bolstering laws.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...for status updates and other feeds from this sites which will eventually take a majo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, second, secondly, so, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1207.87684729 138% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58389261745 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84848534219 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56711409396 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 379.143842365 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3748873872 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.933333333 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225538866251 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842223105021 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480467687789 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146581562807 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484121201196 0.0609392437508 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 55.0591133005 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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