“The older generations tend to have very traditionals ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?”
Nowadays, it seems to have more older people than it had in the past. They usually give classical advices about the way of thinking, living, and behaving. Whether, these ideas are not usefull for younger generations during their preparation in modern life is a controversial issue. In my opinion, I agree to a certain extent about those ideas. And, my reasons will be explained in the following paragraph.
On the one hand, it is said that the today social differed from the past in many fields such as living environment, communications method. That is the reason why many old ideas about lifestyle are not suitable in modern life. If you always have traditional thinking, you will not be able to acquire the modern technologies. Therefore, you will see that it is difficult to become a successful person. For example, Nokia corporation was the biggest and most famous mobile phone enterprise over the world before 2006. But, in 2007, there was a new device, which called Iphone, introduced by Apple Company. Nokia still kept their old thinking abou mobile phone market. As you know, they failed and had to sell themselves to Microsoft corporation.
On the other hand, you are not allowed to forget all the achievements which older generations created. It means, their ideas about how people should live, think and behave still are useful for younger generations. Sometimes, you are totally attracted by modern things such as smartphones, social networks, then you forgot things around your life. If you have advices from older generations, maybe they would bring you back to an more meaning life. Besides, there are many things belong to history and rituals that you have to protect and maintain.
In conclusion, I believe that traditional advices from old generations are un helpful for younger generations in modern life while these ideas are useful in some aspects
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'older' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: older
Nowadays, it seems to have more older people than it had in the past. They us...
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Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ons, maybe they would bring you back to an more meaning life. Besides, there are ...
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Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s, maybe they would bring you back to an more meaning life. Besides, there are ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, you know, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05806451613 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67053331359 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567741935484 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4494984353 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.5263157895 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3157894737 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21052631579 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378993712536 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993723867354 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992015111116 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24642099587 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774461944784 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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