According to a survey, people involve certain professions are seen to be honest? What is the situation in your country .? Why?
Honesty is the cornerstone of all success, without which confidence and ability to perform shall cease to exist. Nowadays people are indulged in so many professions which are prevailing in all over the world and some of these professionals requires people to demonstrate extra level of honesty than other professions. This situation is same all over the world and in my country also I will portray this phenomenon and in the subsequent segments.
As far as my views are concerned, there are some occupations in which there are no rooms for dishonesty and honesty is the best method to acquire immense benefits and to run a long racesuch as doctors, teachers etcetera. Doctors have to tell the property ceases to their patients so that they can aware about the problems which cause the crisis and if they have little deceases then doctors must tell them and give them live prolonging drugs and medicines which can help them to curb the ailments. Do you to the advent of science, not diseases are in the earth face which are not incurable except some tremendous diseases. In addition, teachers are also must be faithful with their students because teachers are the torchbearers of the learners and if they do not guide their storage properly then they are becoming sinful to ruin their life and the reason of their havoc.
However, In the fast pace of life, there is a rat race among people for earn more and more money to acquiring the pleasant life due to this, Nowadays people are falling illegal ways to earn more money such as milkman are doing adulteration with the water in their milk and many companies are sold their cheap and bad quality products in the market with the hundred percent quality labels on high prices.
In gist, everyone has their own views I do not deny any of them but I cogitate that these illegal practices should be eradicate and government should also urge the people about the value of the mankind so that people can serve better for their nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75942028986 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4309839242 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.1318002642 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 182.444444444 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.3333333333 20.7667163134 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0737248513216 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031502420101 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339711407376 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0513373714981 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313323791119 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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