It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Marriage is a very crucial relationship, where one should be fully capable to support the person to whom he or she will be engaged with. Therefore, one should understand their capabilities to hold the relationship like marriage. Capabilities can be gained by finishing school and getting educated or by getting jobs which will help financially. While one might agree with the statement of getting married before finishing their school or getting a job, I believe, if done before finishing school or getting a job, marriage might not last forever.
When a person finishes their school they become well educated to support themselves. In this world, where education is prime important one must get educated by finishing their school so has to be a part of the present society. When a person becomes well verse in the society and the world they live in by finishing their schooling, the level of maturity increases and hence capabilities too. As a result, not only one can support themselves but can support the relationship too.
Furthermore, financial stability is much more important in the present world where one can only get by getting a job. It is an essential part of our lives, failure to which would cause instability in the relationship like marriage. As the needs and demands increase with the increase in the prices, in the relationship like marriage, it becomes a crucial point to have a job support one-selves. Therefore, getting a job is an important aspect and also increases once capability to not only support themselves but also support the relationship.
To conclude, one should finish school or get a decent job that assures not only the future but also assure stable relationship like marriage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...b, marriage might not last forever. When a person finishes their school they bec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04912280702 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86784102725 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459649122807 0.580463131201 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.71428571429 350% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9016824807 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.692307692 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245058980489 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104779137568 0.0925447433944 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121557225234 0.071462118173 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169571012866 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819155513842 0.0609392437508 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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