It is necessery for parents to attend parenting training course to bring their children up. Do you agree or disagree?
The quality of parenting is the global issue of any modern society, making this issue of current interest. Some people claim that upbringing training classes should be in demand for any parents. From my perspective, I completely agree with this proposition, because this approach will enhance a basic parenting knowledge , to aid parents in the caring process.
It seems undeniable that a huge proportion of parents without honed skills make an attempt to raise children by applying the same inheritance methods, approaches as their parent used. And they are not able to alter these because of not having free time to realize new achievement, changes , since usually, especialy young parents have to cope with a enormous workload. However, the world is changing with rapid speed day by day , imposing new rules, new responsibilities . A parent should maintain and probably, change their consciousness as well as their representations to meet our word's current requirements. According to the modern conseptions , parents should raise their youngsters. For instance, by breaking these roles, a child can face an occasion which causes distress, pressure, leading to depression , mental disorder. Therefore, parents should be obligated to have educational lessons, improving parenting.
Moreover, attending lessons also is useful to parents because their decisions are shaped by effects of other opinions , apparently, will not be wrong. Interaction with others assists to be succeed in own life.
In conclusion, attending educational classes should be obligated, increasing the quality of parenting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61825726141 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04581518061 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655601659751 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6359170092 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.153846154 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250450514363 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851788269298 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577140601514 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127458191954 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608826582845 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.