Our global diaspora is broadly segregated into two halves oriental and occidental. There are broad to be difference on social, economical and cultural front as well. Therefore, the issue of internet transforming the way information is shared and consumed and has also created problems is of no exception and irrefutable. This essay is going to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of internet with pertinent argument and examples.
To justify the view point, internet has caved way for easy life and easy communication in many organizations and schools. Before now the means of communication is through letter writing which with take weeks or month to arrive. With internet schools today can run online courses especially for working class parent and teens who have little or no time to attend classes.
Another, pivotal aspect of my stance is that many people argument that internet has created more problems that did not exist in the pass. Although, many young ones and old ones have been bully through internet site. And some have lost money as a result of fake people promising love to them. I specifically, opined that internet has more advantages than disadvantages.
Although, the situation seems dire, but there are severe steps we can take to make tangible changes. Firstly, the federal and state government can join task force to regulate the contend that individuals are sending. Secondly, the age of using internet she be above 18years to prevent bully.
To conclude, I would like to say that although internet is highly beneficial but we should be prudent to strike a balance, logical and rational approach towards the same for the optimal and fruitful outcomes of efforts or utilization of resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 8.36945812808 239% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15357142857 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76755758748 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632142857143 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1450135601 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249656858373 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731240623124 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850766356123 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116389121274 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063271214571 0.0609392437508 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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