In this days, most people believe that having a lot of gadgets and labor-saving devices in the homes such as vacuum cleaners and recent computer technologies is the sign of developed nation. Although some people claim that these devices made our life more complicated and less free time, they have improved many aspects of human's life. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss some advantages of these technologies.
To begin with there, are various reasons to accept that having homes full of recent gadgets and technologies as a point of developed nations. Firstly, although these instruments reduced physical activities and this is a disadvantage for humans, the speed of doing the works became faster and easier. For example, the speed of washing dishes has become faster as well as easier by dishwasher rather than washing by hands.
In addition, while depending on computer technologies is harmful to people's health, they have many efficiencies and are useful. The time of getting to information decreased and communication has become very simple. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by NMY University researchers in 2016 shows that smartphone, a sign of advanced technology, has the important role in a significant number of works such as business and communication.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about labor-saving devices and technologies, my personal sentiment is that these facilities enhanced the quality of our living and has made human's life more convenient
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37083333333 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96949478962 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8237894986 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.9 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6 7.25397266985 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251788075834 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899157062136 0.0925447433944 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100884804169 0.071462118173 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136160188665 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996295748865 0.0609392437508 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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