Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes?
Nowadays, due to globalization, a significant increase in the number of oversea tourism is witnessed. Although the obvious benefits it brings for the development of a country, its drawbacks can not be denied since it affects negatively to the local habitat. In my opinion, the government play a vital role in the reducing of these prejudices.
To begin with, due to the low level awareness of the minority tourists, the local resident afraid that it will affect negatively to the environment which threaten their habitat. For example, a substantial rise is witnessed in the number of waste products into water such as lakes and rivers which is the water source of the whole village. Thus, drinking such an contaminated water cause numerous serious disease. Furthermore, an overwhelmed in the number of tourists also shorten the lifetime of some ancient building.
In my opinion, visiting to a new country not only help an individual gain valuable experience and unforgettable memories but also contributing to boost the nation economy. Therefore, the government should take actions to improve the reputation of tourist attraction places. First, promoting a campaign to raise the local resident awareness about the opportunities that tourism brings should be on top of the priorities. For example, the more number of visitors the more opportunities for local people to do business such as selling food, surveries or renting shared house, which help them earn more money to improve the living standard. On the other hand, a more careful supervision and appropriate actions from local policies also play an important role to prevent the harmful actions to the environment from visitors.
In conclusion, the advantages that tourism brings to a country is unquestionable. However, to reduce the prejudice from local resident, the government should raise the visitors awareness and have an appropriate punishment if any harmful action to the local habitat is detected.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... the whole village. Thus, drinking such an contaminated water cause numerous serio...
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Line 3, column 520, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the lifetime of some ancient building. In my opinion, visiting to a new country...
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Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'visitors'' or 'visitor's'?
Suggestion: visitors'; visitor's
...sident, the government should raise the visitors awareness and have an appropriate punis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34726688103 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00138683081 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540192926045 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4375552662 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.785714286 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0825688013014 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0280121493988 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322445271253 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0530593978267 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254776140729 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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