"People should stop giving to charities because they don't know where their money ends up."
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement.
The existence of humanity and kindness in society is a result of charities. It is argued that people should not giving charities because they are unaware of the fact that whether their donation is ending up at the right place or not. This essay will discuss the reasons why one should not stop giving to charities but simultaneously they need to be conscious as well.
To commence with, charity brings up philanthropic ideology in the society for people. Through charity one can keeps the humanity and kindness alive in the society.When we donate something whether its monetary help or other kind of care to someone, let say, the needy one, we contribute to humanity as well. Therefore, one should not stop giving to charities to keep the humanity going on.
However, one should always need to be conscious while donating their money. When we donate to certain organization which is into charity without investigating about them, we don't know whether our money is really reaching up to the people who is in need or not. For instance, some organizations are not utilizing the donated money for the right use.Thus, one always need to be careful while donating.
This essay discussed how in order to keep the humanity and kindness alive in the society, one should always continue doing charity however, they also need to be conscious for this. In my opinion, charity needs to be continued but with proper consciousness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, really, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94166666667 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66863208821 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529166666667 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 377.1 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2399202505 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.818181818 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208144193524 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966636919218 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682606984787 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146073373215 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668235001261 0.0609392437508 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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