You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and cannot stay the whole course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter: Explain your interest in the course; Describe you problems; Find out if a refund is possible.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Linh, and I am writing to ask you about a tennis course which I enrolled last week.
As a sports enthusiast, I felt extremely delightful when I saw an advertisement of your tennis course in my schools. Furthermore, learning this course means that I have a chance to meet trainer Harry – the best tennis player I have met. I always idolized him during I was young. In addition to that, the tennis place near my house and suitable for my schedule.
However, I have to say that I can not stay for the whole course for several private problems.
As you know, I am an exchange student, so my study period at Oxford University will finish at the end of the month, but your tennis course is planned to complete in two months later. I wonder as my circumstance, I could receive the refund back?
Thank you for spending your time with me.
Yours faithfully,
Linh Bui
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 6, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...se which I enrolled last week. As a sports enthusiast, I felt extremely delightful...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, so, thus, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 741.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54601226994 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60422040982 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656441717791 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9181477802 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313419443791 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11094693407 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735386723186 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171451278198 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215472611522 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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