Some people think that the Internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities are becoming more isolated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In the modern world, the influence of the Internet has been a matter of great concern. While some people agree that cyberspace makes users and society are gradually becoming separated, I still support the idea that the Internet brings more advantageous to individuals in daily life.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why some critics contend that the cyberspace makes users isolated from their communities. This is because it is thought that people in technological era unwilling to participate in social activities due to having a wide range of entertainment tools within their house. Users perhaps glueing their eyes for long hours scrolling aimlessly Facebook, Instagram or playing computer games. This tendency leads to that they do not interest in face-to-face communication and gradually far from their society. For example, in some countries like the United States, the percentage of young people did not take part in voluntary activities were up to 80% in 2017 with the main cause was the influence of the Internet.
On the other hand, I still personally support the statement that the Internet has the own advantages. The cyberspace is fundamental tools make their life become easier. First of all, the most remarkable thing about the Internet is that connecting people who have the same interest closer, even they are in different part of the world. This is well illustrated by the fact that through Facebook – one of the biggest social networking sites, users might easily connect and talk with people who have the same idols, interest in fashion or showbiz. Secondly, with the Internet, it seems that when people far from home, they easily connect with members of the family via chat, video call with reasonable prices. Therefore, it is true that the Internet has unseparated part of our life.
In conclusion, although the cyberspace makes people more isolated from their society, this tool perhaps makes their life easier due to connecting people in different part of the world, supporting members of the family when they far away from home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11799410029 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63477153479 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530973451327 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3726747098 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.928571429 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188036666017 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675078136154 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522246267032 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133477813092 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361389485359 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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