Both the reading and listening is about the old artifact that is used in united kingdom in which there is serious problem and limitation in preserving those artifacts or not. The author of the reading says that due to some problem it is hard to preserve those artifacts. The lecture cast doubt about this statement in which she says that United kingdom has a rules and pattern to preserve them.
Firstly the reading claim that valuable artifacts are lost to the construction project. Author of reading says that when there is a new construction work is permitted to carry on, it is done on the old structure and that is how old structure is destroyed. But the lecture challenged this statement. She says that after 1990 there is an official guideline which was so strict to protect the old artifacts. She also says the pattern is to examine the construction site and search the site whether there is any old artifact present or not. The lecture also extends that if there is any presence of old artifacts then the builder and local government will work together to find out the structure. She also mention that there is also a proper documentation of the findings from the site.
secondly, the author tells that there is a low financial support for the finding of artifacts. He also elaborates that government as well as private organization does not fund for excavation. The lecture challenge this statement boldly. She says that there is a financial support from the construction company which was not given before. she also said that there is an initial exam and if something found from this exam the government as well as construction company will bear this expenses.
Thirdly, The author from reading says that it is hard for anyone to pursue archaeology as a carrier as many of the graduate of this subject switch carrier to other subject. The lecture goes to the contrary. She opines that due to increase amount of payment to archaeologist there is a lots of professional are found
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 703, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'mentions'.
Suggestion: mentions
...her to find out the structure. She also mention that there is also a proper documentat...
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Line 3, column 729, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ure. She also mention that there is also a proper documentation of the findings f...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...ation of the findings from the site. secondly, the author tells that there is a low f...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...ion company which was not given before. she also said that there is an initial exam...
^^^
Line 7, column 275, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are a lots'?
Suggestion: there are a lots
...ease amount of payment to archaeologist there is a lots of professional are found
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Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...nt of payment to archaeologist there is a lots of professional are found
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 10.4613686534 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 12.0772626932 166% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 5.01324503311 359% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1373.03311258 120% => OK
No of words: 344.0 270.72406181 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80813953488 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65798159208 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.433139534884 0.540411800872 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 419.366225166 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3676224504 49.2860985944 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8888888889 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 7.06452816374 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187538306326 0.272083759551 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608521847384 0.0996497079465 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402613165025 0.0662205650399 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11961377568 0.162205337803 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020744205583 0.0443174109184 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.3589403974 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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