Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some, it acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people watching television. There is widespread worry that this will only lead to myriad of concerns. In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and should be rejected.
There are number of arguments in favour of my stance but the most preponderant one is that television provide important information such as news regarding daily life, sports, weather, fashion and many more. In fact, Not only it provide information but it also gives entertainment and helps to enjoy our time with friends. We can find overwhelming evidence that television play crucial role in our daily life. Needless to say, all merits stand viewers in a good stead as far as awareness and entertainment is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of these arguments is that it helps to creates special environment in our home for family for watching special programs. Beside, it also motivate, encourage and teaches us various skill and tools which we can apply in our life. For example, weather forecast is one of them which suggest what kind of cloth should we wear. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of watching television.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of television are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'create'.
Suggestion: create
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Message: Did you mean 'motivates'?
Suggestion: motivates
...ching special programs. Beside, it also motivate, encourage and teaches us various skill...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of them which suggest what kind of cloth should we wear. Hence, it is apparent wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, regarding, so, for example, in fact, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96846846847 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77069505276 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59009009009 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4942917911 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9166666667 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0932024034152 0.242375264174 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032076313378 0.0925447433944 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268623460622 0.071462118173 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0478323707429 0.151781067708 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282750613096 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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